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Analyse des Richter-Modells
Das Profil bietet eine herausragende Passung hinsichtlich CSRD, doppelter Wesentlichkeitsanalyse, LkSG und Zertifizierungen (GRI, SASB) inklusive idealer Sprachkenntnisse (Deutsch, Englisch, Italienisch). Die optimierte Fassung schärft die Projekterfolge durch präzise Short-References auf Englisch und passt die Terminologie exakt an die internationale Beratungsausrichtung an.
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Senior sustainability consultant with more than eight years of experience in consulting and in-house ESG reporting, with a focus on mid-market companies in the DACH region. Recent assignments include CSRD implementation for a technology group, including a double materiality assessment, LkSG risk mapping across 2,400 suppliers for an industrial client, and 12 reporting engagements under GRI and SASB. Additional work includes developing a climate risk assessment methodology, delivering workshops for chambers of commerce and industry associations, and co-authoring two studies on sustainability in the mid-market segment. This background supports structured reporting processes, clear translation of regulatory requirements into practical implementation, and reliable senior guidance for clients, junior consultants, and thought leadership formats in German, English, and Italian.
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↑Freelance Sustainability Consultant · Patel Sustainability
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Tasks were reordered to foreground direct matches with the target role: CSRD implementation, double materiality assessment and LkSG risk mapping. Wording was tightened into active consulting language and workshop and thought-leadership work was retained as supporting evidence.
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Implementation of CSRD and double materiality assessments; execution of LkSG audits with supplier risk mapping and delivery of sustainability workshops
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- •CSRD-Erstanwendung für Mittelstand-Tech-Konzern (850 MA, Süddeutschland) — Implementierung doppelte Wesentlichkeitsanalyse
- •Lieferketten-Sorgfaltspflichten-Audit (LkSG) für Industrial-Goods-Konzern — Risk-Mapping über 2.400 Lieferanten
- •Speaker-Pool für CSRD-Workshops (IHK, Bundesverband, Branchenverbände)
- •Mitautor 2 Studien zur Mittelstands-Nachhaltigkeit (Stiftungsstudie)
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- Led CSRD implementation for a mid-market technology group in Southern Germany, including the double materiality assessment
- Conducted a Supply Chain Due Diligence Act audit for an industrial group, including risk mapping across 2,400 suppliers
- Delivered CSRD workshops for chambers of commerce as well as federal and industry associations
- Co-authored two studies on sustainability in the mid-market segment for a foundation
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↑Senior Sustainability Manager · Nordwind Advisory GmbH
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The wording prioritises ESG reporting, GRI and SASB because these are core requirements of the target role. The climate-risk task was kept second to reflect methodological depth relevant to senior ESG consulting.
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Management of ESG reporting engagements under GRI and SASB; development of an internal climate risk assessment methodology
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- •Lead-Berater für 12 Konzern-ESG-Reportings (GRI + SASB)
- •Aufbau interne Methodologie für Climate-Risk-Assessments
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- Led 12 ESG reporting engagements for corporate clients based on GRI and SASB standards
- Built an internal methodology for climate risk assessment in consulting projects
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↑Sustainability Consultant · Meridian Sustainability Partners
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This station was retained unchanged in scope because no task details were provided in the input. The entry remains included to preserve the complete career history and structural integrity of the profile.
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Sustainability consulting in corporate reporting and ESG-related projects
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